Hey McKensie, cool pose your tonal values are working well as a group and I'm getting a nice sense of 3-d ness... the anatomy on the arms are too indistinct though just feels like her arm is sort of form-less sort of "blobby" the foot needs some attention its look awkward and your shapes are too tentative you really need to figure out what your topology is and make sure that the "shapes" your highlights and shadows are making are accurately and confidently describing the topology of the figure and clothing and helmet etc, etc.
Hey McKensie, cool pose your tonal values are working well as a group and I'm getting a nice sense of 3-d ness... the anatomy on the arms are too indistinct though just feels like her arm is sort of form-less sort of "blobby" the foot needs some attention its look awkward and your shapes are too tentative you really need to figure out what your topology is and make sure that the "shapes" your highlights and shadows are making are accurately and confidently describing the topology of the figure and clothing and helmet etc, etc.
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